martes, 10 de marzo de 2009

a terrifying night

I left went out disco and i was with my cousin.

Then three girls came and throw of my bag whit i wore, until they caught it, they got away from.
My father got since uncles' house in car.

That night we went to complain to the police because i wanted to recover my things.
I placed a complaint and i said my mother what it happened

1 comentario:

  1. I (left) went out TO A disco and I was with my cousin.

    Then three girls came and (throw of) PULLED ON THE (my) bag (whit i wore,) THAT I WAS CARRYING until they (caught) GOT it. THEN they got away (from).
    My father (got) TOOK US TO MY (since) AUNT AND uncle'S house BY car*.

    That night we (went to complain to) FILED A COMPLAINT AT the police OFFICER because I wanted to recover my things.
    I placed a complaint and I (said) TOLD my mother what (it) happened

    * YOU COULD ALSO SAY "My father gave us a ride to my aunt and uncle's house".

    GOOD WORK! TRY TO BE CAREFUL NOT TO TRANSLATE WHAT YOU ARE THINKING IN SPANISH DIRECTLY INTO ENGLISH. TRY TO REMEMBER WHAT YOU KNOW ABOUT ENGLISH WHEN YOU WRITE. ALSO REMEMBER TO CAPITALIZE THE SUBJECT "I" ( NOT i ).

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